#1 Behind the lies (Edited- Please Re-read, better or worse?)

Across an ocean of tears
I came looking for you
I cast away my fears
To prove my love was true

I was lost in your eyes
I saw behind all the lies
To the pain that you bear
Behind the icy cold stare

I couldnt break away
I made my choice to stay
To stay by your side
To say I felt inside

I gave you my word
And I hope that you heard
I said I loved you
And I waited to hear it from you

Those words never came
My heart fell in shame
You would never see
My undying love
For you.

Like I said. If you feel the words, and they mean something to you, then it flows easy.

I would like some comments please. Whats good? Whats bad? Doesnt matter, I'd just like some opinions.